Warren and Veran

What a badly written article! Trying to be clever with constantly and artificially complicated sentence structure, and failing miserably in content! Reminds school essays my sister-in-law wrote. This style of writing was/is considered intellectual! All what it is is a messy attempt to promote supposed cleverness of its writer. Gee, if you put out all self-promoting silly sentences, what do you have left? Is there content even for one single paragraph of information, or of thought? This was a perfect example of rotten writing and should be used as a such example in teaching writing.

By the way, my sister-in-law told me that she wants to be a journalist...

What a badly written article! Trying to be clever with constantly and artificially complicated sentence structure, and failing miserably in content! Reminds school essays my sister-in-law wrote. This style of writing was/is considered intellectual! All what it is is a messy attempt to promote supposed cleverness of its writer. Gee, if you put out all self-promoting silly sentences, what do you have left? Is there content even for one single paragraph of information, or of thought? This was a perfect example of rotten writing and should be used as a such example in teaching writing.

By the way, my sister-in-law told me that she wants to be a journalist...